Ignite learner response

 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

WWW: Good information and overview

Clear slides and conventions

Media language - detailed

U&G was good

Representation theory was good

EBI: More to say on first slide

Running out time

Too much on language, there should be more on industry

1. 5

2. 5

3. 5

4. 5

5. 4

6. 4

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: I think that my ideas were well planned and  constructed when it came to presenting them. I was clear and confident on what was on my slides and so I was able to give a digestible and cohesive presentation which made sense whilst trying to balance the 6 criteria. 

EBI: I definitely agree with other peoples feedback about the lack of industry context and I think that was where I wasn't doing so well at balancing the criteria because I had focused so much on language. But had I paced my self a bit better I would have actually gotten through my industry slide which would have hopefully satisfied my audience more. 

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I definitely need to update my statement of intent after I made a few mistakes and have since then changed some ideas. I think my concept offers enough clarity with the idea itself and the media language aspects which will help me build it. In a way the excess media language might come in handy here. Yes, my concept, song choices and mise-en-scene will all hopefully attract my intended audience because I've designed it to do so. The very pop/alternative aesthetic is something attractive to girls aged to 14-27 (as stated in my presentation). I will be editing my statement of intent so yes I will change key parts as well add more media language to maximise marks and meet the brief.