Preliminary LR

 1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW: Concept

On screen text

Camera framing

Narrative

Branding at beginning/end

EBI: Faster editing

Varying locations

Lip-syncing

Costume changes

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.

EBI: 1) More shots 2) More time 

WWW: 1) Concept was well received 2) Good camerawork

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

I was a bit pressed for time so not so effectively.

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

Allocate more time for it, and schedule things in better

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.

Mostly camerawork and editing needs tweaking.